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#33442 - 03/04/08 09:20 PM
Wrote a song....ish.
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StarGirlSteph
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Registered: 10/08/07
Posts: 402
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Right, I cba saying ewt about it, just honest opinions if you would be so kind lol. And if the rhyming's crap then...erm...I meant for it not to rhyme 
Verse 1
Now I know you can see my eyes don't look at you,
But I know we can't look forward,
The only thing I see is that we're not pulling through,
And I can't say I'm not scared.
I don't want you to close your eyes,
But I can't stand them looking into mine,
Is it me, or when we say,
That it's okay,
We're really saying goodbye?
Chorus
I can't waste your time,
That's why I'm giving up,
It's obvious that, to you,
Being sorry wasn't enough,
And I can't waste your time,
On needing words and empty looks,
Because I knew long ago,
That this would be too tough.
I don't want you to close your eyes,
But I can't stand them looking into mine,
Is it me, or when we say,
That it's okay,
We're really saying goodbye?
Chorus
I can't waste your time,
That's why I'm giving up,
It's obvious that, to you,
Being sorry wasn't enough,
And I can't waste your time,
On needing words and empty looks,
Because I knew long ago,
That this would be too tough.
Middlish bit I can't remember thname for
You say we'll be fine,
When we think we can smile,
And I almost convince myself,
That you're right.
Chorus
But I can't waste your time,
That's why I'm giving up,
My Sorrys couldn't save the words we gave and the hurt we made,
And I can't waste your time,
Because needing us isn't enough,
And we both knew long ago,
That this would be too tough,
And that's why we gave up.
_________________________
I love Jonny :-)
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#33506 - 03/06/08 09:44 PM
Re: Wrote a song....ish.
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wizkid
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Registered: 08/10/07
Posts: 95
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its ok had trouble thinkin how would u sing it
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#33977 - 04/09/08 06:01 PM
Re: Wrote a song....ish.
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LEK2129
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Registered: 03/12/08
Posts: 63
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We would have to hear it with music but it sounds good.
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