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#32697 - 02/03/08 10:58 PM
Re: Creative Writing Portfolio
[Re: Lally]
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Lally
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Registered: 10/08/06
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My monologue..
I don’t need them! I don’t. I don’t want to end up like any of them. Oohh.. they all think they’re so bloody remarkable, sat there in their expensive suits, with their fucking qualifications – a string of letters after their name, that’s all! And they think, see, they think those stupid little letters mean that they can look right down their nose at me. They think that a few stupid pieces of paper with writing on make them better human beings than me! I may not wear a suit, I may not be as ‘educated’ as them, I may not have gone to Oxford or sodding bloody Cambridge! But do you know what? They’re not even human beings, they’re all robots. Cold, emotionless robots that care about nothing but stocks and shares and profit. And as for passion. Passion! They try to tell me about passion.. you don’t know the meanin of the flamin’ word! They’ve got a passion all right, a passion to do over as many people as it takes to maximise their profits. People like me! And then they expect me to come and work here, with them.. pfft.. I’d rather live off pennies, thanks.
Honest opinions much appreciated.. xx
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#32729 - 02/04/08 06:09 PM
Re: Creative Writing Portfolio
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Mekanto
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Registered: 07/13/07
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I thought it was very good, liked the end best. elpemmy what swearing?
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#32753 - 02/04/08 10:03 PM
Re: Creative Writing Portfolio
[Re: Mekanto]
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Lally
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Registered: 10/08/06
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It says max. 300 words. Do you think that (198) is too short then?
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#32762 - 02/04/08 10:45 PM
Re: Creative Writing Portfolio
[Re: Lally]
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xXx Naomi xXx
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Registered: 03/27/07
Posts: 1014
Loc: Eire Babeh !
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This is so off topic. But MISERY BUSINESS KATEYBABY <3
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#32804 - 02/05/08 11:50 PM
Re: Creative Writing Portfolio
[Re: elpemmy]
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Leon
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Registered: 08/22/07
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Loc: Sheffield!
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Hmmm, interesting, I could've sworn I saw some swearing in there...  Edit: found it- it says Oohh.. they all think they’re so bloody remarkable, sat there in their expensive suits, with their fucking qualifications She never said it had to be swear-free.
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#32811 - 02/06/08 10:47 AM
Re: Creative Writing Portfolio
[Re: Leon]
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Lally
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Registered: 10/08/06
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There is definitely swearing in some plays? And I'm an adult and it's a university course so I can't see them having a problem with it. A few people have swore in their english language coursework (a2) and the teacher's fine with it.
"Words are neither positive or negative, they are simply letters on a page; it is the meaning we ourselves put to these words... blablabla"
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