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#31356 - 01/14/08 09:03 PM Poems
elpemmy elpemmy journeyman Registered: 11/24/07 Posts: 56 Loc: Somerset	So, I'd really like to right, but I'm not the greatest poet in the world. Here goes, anyhow: Tears Tears of joy, tears of sadness, Tears faked and tears of madness, Tears of Pain and frustration, Tears of hate and irritation, from each and every person. Opinions? And post your own too! P.S. The last line doesn't fit, but I like it. $\:p$ _________________________
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#31362 - 01/14/08 09:22 PM Re: Poems [Re: elpemmy]
Clare Clare Pooh-Bah Registered: 03/14/07 Posts: 2094 Loc: Nottingham	I know the poem is about tears. But I can't stand that repetition, its over the top to me. The rhyming works well though Some of mine are here: http://www.teentoday.co.uk/boards/ubbthreads.php/ubb/showflat/Number/27197/page/1#Post27197 http://www.teentoday.co.uk/boards/ubbthreads.php/ubb/showflat/Number/27705/page/1#Post27705 http://www.teentoday.co.uk/boards/ubbthreads.php/ubb/showflat/Number/30905/page/1#Post30905 _________________________ Steal my heart and hold my tongue. I feel my time, my time has come.
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#33227 - 02/21/08 06:32 PM Re: Poems [Re: Clare]
Shalex Shalex stranger Registered: 02/21/08 Posts: 10	neat.. but ia not good in writting Poems .. thanks! _________________________
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